Zaimokuza Yoshiki asked.
“Did Hiratsuka-sensei give you advice?”
A flash of understanding flashed in Yukinoshita Yukino’s eyes.
In the past year or so, the Service Department has dealt with several incidents, mostly under the guidance of Hiratsuka Shizuka.
“That’s right! I’m here, Kiza Yoshiteru, a man who is a swordsman general!”
As he spoke, Zaimokuza Yoshiki also made a gesture of drawing a sword in the air.
“It turns out to be Chuunibyou.”
Yukinoshita Yukino narrowed her eyes slightly.
The two girls who have read “Steins;Gate” already have a deep understanding of the existence of chuunibyou, and they are not very opposed to this way of speaking.
“I came here because I heard that the Ministry of Service has the ability to grant wishes.”
Zaimokuza Yoshiki ignored the term “chuunibyou” and continued.
“That’s not the case. The service department is not fulfilling your wishes, it’s just helping.”
Yukinoshita Yukino denied it, “Then, tell me what your commission is?”
“…This is the manuscript of a light novel. I want to submit it to a newcomer award, but I have no friends and I don’t know how well I am writing, so I want to ask you.”
Zaimokuza Yoshiki’s eyes were wandering, and he felt a little embarrassed as he took out the manuscript of the light novel and placed it on the long table.
“The original manuscript of the light novel?”
Yukinoshita Yukino murmured softly, inexplicably remembering the existence of someone.
“If it’s a light novel, I know someone who can help you better!”
Yuigahama Yui blurted it out directly.
“Really!”
Zaimokuza Yoshiki looked excited.
“Yuigahama, don’t drag others into this casually.”
Yukinoshita Yukino suddenly said.
“ah.”
Yuigahama Yui was surprised.
Do you not want to cause trouble to small businesses?
This was what she had in mind.
“Please, you two! If there is a better way, please use it!”
Zaimokuza Yoshiki pleaded at this time.
“That’s fine.”
Yukinoshita Yukino finally sighed and made a decision.
“Then let me step in. If the other party is willing, I can do it myself. If not, I can’t force it.”
“Don’t talk like that, Xiaoxue. In fact, the people in Xiaoqi are very good, and we are friends. This kind of trivial matter cannot rise to any high level.”
Yuigahama Yui comforted her from the side.
“Friends?”
There was a fluctuation in the eyes of the girl like snow, and she forgot to deny this statement for a moment.
…
“Is there actually a light novel club?”
Arriving at the activity room next door, Zaimokuza Yoshiki was shocked.
Ignoring his fuss, Yuigahama Yui took the initiative and knocked on the door.
“Come in.”
After the response came out, Yukinoshita Yukino opened the door.
“Is it you, and… Zaimuzha?”
The first thing Hikigaya Hachiman saw were the two girls in the front, and then Zaimokuza Yoshiteru in the rear.
“Hikigaya Hachiman!? My ally, I didn’t expect that after such a long time, we would meet at this time… I see, is the light novel club the organization you established? Sure enough, your ambition is more ambitious! “
Zaimokuza Yoshiki rushed directly to him with an excited expression, and made various movements while talking.
“We’re not that familiar, right?”
He said calmly.
In junior high school, he and Zaimokuza Yoshiki were classmates for two years, but they basically didn’t speak to each other. He just didn’t run away when he dragged some classmates to talk about certain topics.
“Senior’s acquaintance?”
Only then did Nayuta react.
The other girls also looked over.
“this.”
Zaimokuza Yoshiki suddenly realized the situation in the activity room, and he couldn’t help but break out in a cold sweat due to some social fear.
And why are they all girls?
At this juncture, Yukinoshita Yukino spoke again: “This classmate came to entrust our service department. He wanted to write a novel and submit it, and he needed someone’s advice. At this time, I thought of you. Compared to me This unrelated person, you are much more professional…but I didn’t expect you to know each other.”
That’s right, because of Yuigahama’s lax tongue, she already knew the secret identities of everyone here.
Seeing Yukinoshita’s presence, other people in the light novel club had different expressions.
During this period of time, they had met Yukinoshita a few times, but they just didn’t know each other. After all, the two clubs were very close.
“It’s really strange for Yukinoshita to ask for help.”
Hikigaya Hachiman expressed emotion.
But this is also correct. The strong Yukinoshita will not think that his ability in this area can surpass them. It is not surprising to make this suggestion.
“Xiaoqi, can I ask you for a favor?”
Yuigahama Yui also inquired carefully.
“It’s been a long time since I’ve read the manuscript for anyone, but for your sake, I’ll agree to it.”
He thought about it and agreed.
“Sure enough, I saw you right, the Great Bodhisattva Hachiman who saves the suffering!”
Zaimuza Yoshiki roared excitedly.
“Hachiman Bodhisattva?”
As soon as the name came out, everyone else was stunned.
“Pfft.”
Wu Geng Liuli was the first to laugh.
This inexplicably made her laugh.
The others seemed to understand something and smiled understandingly.
185 We should respect you first!
“Come with me.”
Hikigaya Hachiman exhaled, gave Zaimokuza Yoshiki a look, and then walked out the door.
Agreeing to this matter was regarded as settling the fate of Zeng Wei’s classmate, so he had no intention of letting others interfere. And looking at the state of the swordsman general, he knew that contact with other people was already hard work for him.
After walking some distance from the door, Hikigaya Hachiman leaned against the wall and began to read the manuscript of the light novel in his hand.
He had no expectations for the level of the work and was mentally prepared.
But after flipping through a few pages, he became impatient.
The manuscript Liuli showed him back then was better than this manuscript except for the lengthy explanation and settings.
The most important thing is that it is nothing to see and is created with no sense of expectation.
“It’s so boring… It’s so boring.”
After reading it for just over ten minutes, he closed the manuscript and spoke slowly.
“Hikigaya, you haven’t even finished reading it! You just browsed through some of the content. Didn’t you see the essence of the story?”
Zaimokuza Yoshiki spread his hands and questioned.
“You don’t have to read it so carefully, because no matter how exquisite the story is, it is useless if you don’t even have the basics. For example, your writing level is as good as that of a primary school student, and your grammar is messy. Let’s assume you are a high school student now, right?”
He raised his eyebrows.
The goblin’s writing style was poor at first, because the goblin’s education was really only elementary school, and the two cannot be compared.
Of course, the level of the goblin is different now. Although the vocabulary accumulation is still very poor, and there are occasional grammatical errors, the smoothness of reading has become very smooth, and the reputation has gradually improved.
This is also the benefit gained from communicating with them, top authors in the industry, and a subtle improvement.
“Well, this is because I heard that approachable words will make people feel more approachable, so I wrote it like this.”
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Zaimokuza Yoshiki’s expression changed drastically.
“Excuse me, who did you hear this from?”
He looked thoughtfully.
“Yamada Fairy-sensei, the author of “The Dark Fairy of Explosion” said in an interview.”
Zaimokuza Yoshiki held it back for a moment before speaking.
That’s okay.
Hikigaya Hachiman tried his best to hold back his smile.
“Ahem, this is different. Everyone has their own path to walk, Yao… Teacher Yamada’s works are best-selling because she has more advantages, thus covering up the shortcomings, but not everyone As good as her.”
If the goblin hears these words, she will probably be very happy, right?
He thought secretly in his heart.
“Is that so?”
Zaimuzuo Yihui seems to have some enlightenment.
“Besides that, the inexplicable stripping welfare plot, needless to say, is also learned from Mr. Yamada, right? You also don’t have to do it right. Even if it is a plot that everyone likes to see, it still needs some foreshadowing, and the writing is also very dry.”
“Yes Yes Yes.”
“In addition, many seemingly noble English words are used incorrectly, and even if they are used correctly, they should not be used so often. The meaning of many places is unclear, which will increase the difficulty of reading.”
“I will correct it!”
The current situation between the two of them is like a teacher teaching students.
Although Zaimokuza Yoshiki didn’t know his identity as a light novelist, he still felt inexplicably convinced and recognized, as if he had found a treasure.
“So, you have to start from the basics and correct some of your wrong habits first, and then I will tell you how to improve…”
Hikigaya Hachiman gave the order, and then the two exchanged line accounts. It will become more convenient to communicate through line in the future.
The most important thing is that Zaimokuza Yoshiki cannot bear the invisible pressure in the club.
Before leaving, Zaimokuza Yoshiki suddenly thought of something, came closer to him, gave him a thumbs up and whispered: “Teacher Hachiman, it is amazing to be able to build the Crystal Palace in reality! We must respect you as our priority!”
“Do not make jokes.”
Turning his back, Hikigaya Hachiman’s tense expression became very exciting.
