But different from the feminine pale color of makeup, the Nanxiang Shi’s complexion in front of her was a healthy white.
The short black hair was obviously not taken care of very much and looked a bit messy, but since it was not that long, it was generally clean and well-proportioned.
And hidden under this short black hair are facial features that are very outstanding among high school students.
Just look at this face.
Shizuka Hiratsuka roughly understood why Ishikawa Kento could say the words “If Nango-san is willing, he will definitely not have too few friends around him” in such a sure tone.
At least to some extent.
With this face, there will definitely be no shortage of female friends.
But what is more attractive may be the eyes among the other person’s facial features.
There is no greasy planning of adults, and there is also less impetuousness of young people.
Those are a pair of eyes that look particularly ‘clean’.
At least it’s about a million times better looking than the eyes of a high school boy who stares at you all day long.
“Who is this teacher?”
Under Shizuka Hiratsuka’s gaze, he obviously noticed her Nanxiang and looked over with some curiosity.
“I am Shizuka Hiratsuka, a second-year Chinese teacher at Sobu High School. I am here for exchange and study. Hello, Nango-san.”
Shizuka Hiratsuka coughed dryly, retracted his too obvious gaze, smiled and stretched out his hand.
“Hello, Hiratsuka-sensei, I am Nango Tomo, a second-year student at Ocha High School.”
Nan Xiangshi smiled and nodded, and took the initiative to shake hands with Hiratsuka Shizuka.
He has a good sense of distance, neither too close nor too distant.
Hiratsuka Shizuka, an older leftover girl who has already entered her third year of work, actually feels that she would be very comfortable getting along with this guy.
Ahem!
what’s on your mind? Shizuka Hiratsuka.
The other party is a student from another school.
Get rid of any distracting thoughts that suddenly arise in your mind.
Hiratsuka Shizu coughed slightly, then asked curiously:
“Mr. Ishikawa, “Ocha” is the school magazine that Ocha High School is particularly famous for. Is it a literary school magazine published every year?”
As a member of the exchange study group, Hiratsuka Shizuka had of course studied some of the traditional customs handed down from Ocha High School.
Naturally, the school magazine “Royal Tea” was also included in her research.
“Yes. In about a week and a half, the Ocha Festival will begin, so we have to prepare for the “Ocha” school magazine from now on.”
Ishikawa Kento took the novel manuscript paper handed over by Nango: “Since Hiratsuka-sensei is here, how about we read the article written by Nango-san together?”
“Hmm…Isn’t this a little bad…?”
Although Hiratsuka Shizu was a little moved.
After all, this is truly the first thing written in Japan.
It is completely different from a dead-eyed high school student in his own high school who frequently writes short essays full of resentment against society and the world. It can be said to be full of gold content.
But Nanxiang Shi himself is still around after all, and he is not a teacher at Ocha High School. It is indeed a bit inappropriate, right?
“It’s okay. Nanxiang-san, do you mind?”
Nanxiang Shi wanted to nod at this moment.
He had heard of the name of “Spring Things” in his previous life. Among them, the older leftover girl Shizuka Hiratsuka, who was almost obsessed with marriage and love, had read his novel…
The consequences…
But Kento Ishikawa is also his teacher after all.
Out of respect for the profession of teacher, Nanxiang Shi could only helplessly shake his head at this time, saying that he didn’t mind.
“Since Nanxiang-san doesn’t care, I won’t be polite.”
Obtained the approval of the author himself.
Shizuka Hiratsuka also exhaled and curiously took the manuscript handed over by Taketo Ishikawa.
“She Hidden in the Sea of Azaleas”?
This title…
Novel?
As soon as I saw this death literary theme that high school students should never touch.
Hiratsuka Shizuka was still in a somewhat emotional mood just now, but it was as if she had been hit by a basin of cold water.
Cooled down.
Chapter 119. Is this really a novel you wrote? (4100 words)
Literary fiction.
This is a subject that cannot be written well based on the life experience of a high school student.
If it were a light novel of the imaginary and fantasy type, then Hiratsuka Shizuka would probably still have some hope for it.
but–
This is the subject of a literary novel!
Literature!
The first and most important point to write this type of novel well.
That is, the author himself needs to have a large amount of life experience that is sufficient to support his writing.
Only in this way will the things you write be more substantial and not just rootless duckweeds on paper.
To put it bluntly, literary novels essentially reflect certain social phenomena and social facts. Without the accumulation of experience, it is impossible to write these things well.
The first step to talk about literariness is reality, and the second point is artistic processing.
And children like Nanxiang Shi, who are only about seventeen or eighteen years old, have no experience in the world, and don’t even know how expensive things like gas, rice, oil, and salt are.
How is it possible to write any good novels?
Even if your qualifications and experience are sufficient.
But your writing is not solid enough, the plot is not attractive enough, and in the end you still cannot write any good works.
This is the threshold of ‘literary work’.
It is different from the threshold of ‘light novels’ which mainly entertain the public.
Even these words are not just used to describe Nanxiang.
Hiratsuka Shizuka can say the same.
The literary novels written by people of insignificant age and experience can be said to be unsightly.
The works of the so-called “rising literary star who is rare in a thousand years” and “young writer R-san” are on the Japanese market.
Hiratsuka Shizuka occasionally felt curious. After buying it, she just took a first look at it and never wanted to take a second look at it.
Because these works never reflect a certain phenomenon or something in social reality through stories and plots.
They just used some extremely gorgeous, extremely artificial words and phrases, and piled them up to look like a novel, that’s all.
In essence, it doesn’t even have the slightest bit of literary bullshit.
Instead of forcing yourself to write a novel that is simply not good.
These so-called literary geniuses might as well write prose.
After all, if nothing else, being able to pile up extremely gorgeous sentences into a novel is essentially quite a talent.
Therefore, when I saw Nanxiang, I chose novels as the subject matter of my works.
As a Chinese teacher, Hiratsuka Shizuka, who has a certain level of appreciation of literary works, was the first to remain silent.
She couldn’t help but raise her head and glance at Nan Xiangshi.
He couldn’t help but glance at Kento Ishikawa on the other side.
She was already thinking about what words she would use to comfort Nanxiang later – mainly how to properly and politely ask him to give up novels and write relatively easy subjects like prose.
After all, high school students writing literary novels… this kind of thing is inherently nonsense.
As for now.
Let’s take a look first.
The mature female teacher sighed.
Although I know it will definitely not be a good work, after all, it is something that students worked hard to write.
Even if it was written by a dead-eyed high school student that was full of resentment against social reality, she would read it carefully before commenting.
Pick up this novel called “Her Hidden in the Sea of Azaleas”.
Hiratsuka Shizu looked at it seriously.
‘The one I loved disappeared. ’
‘I will be alone forever. ’
Start.
It is the protagonist’s murmuring self-narration.
And this beginning also surprised Hiratsuka Shizu.
There are no pretentious words and phrases as imagined.
There are also no various metaphors and rhetoric techniques that are piled up with gorgeous words that young people like most.
Some are just calm, simple sentences.
Don’t say anything else.
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Just based on these first two sentences.
Hiratsuka Shizu was basically relieved.
Although I don’t have enough experience, I must still understand the writing techniques of literary works.
Not only the elegant and gorgeous words, but also the solid and simple writing and the plot with enough depth can also touch people’s hearts.
However, although I agree with Nanxiang Shi for not using gorgeous sentences.
But Shizuka Hiratsuka didn’t feel that it was just that, that in front of him was a literary novel that was above the passing line.
To put it bluntly, writing novels for high school students is a bit…
She did not rush to express her opinion, but continued to look down.
It was this glance that made him look past.
Shizuka Hiratsuka discovered it.
Gradually she couldn’t take her eyes back…
In the novel, she was moved by the encounter between the male protagonist and Ju Zi.
The brief separation from Komako will make her heartache.
After returning to that alone environment, she felt unbearably lonely.
When she learns that the hero is determined to find Ju Zi, she will be sincerely happy for the characters in the novel.
Wait until she sees the end.
When the hero cannot find the person he loves no matter how hard he searches.
A feeling of loneliness and despair from the heart quietly pervades.
